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Ben Stone  

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Journal Entry: Mon Jan 28, 2008, 11:18 AM







IF MY THOUGHT DREAMS COULD BE SEEN THEY'D PROBABLY PUT MY HEAD IN A GUILLOTINE


I finally figured out this css thing, hope you enjoy the new look, but this update is not just aesthetic I've added plenty more poetry, which you can read in my gallery [link] I'd like to thank Blueskye27 [link] SoulAgainstSoul [link] and BriannaTWedge [link] for welcoming me to this community for their praise, there great work, and critiques They are very special people, and i urge you all to go check out their gallery's. you will not be disapointed

REMEMBER: THE SUN'S NOT YELLOW, IT'S CHICKEN!


It's alright ma, it's life and life only.




Thought Dream #1


Each piece of work is like flowers on my coffin.




THOUGHT DREAMS: OBSCENE THOUGH RARELY SEEN HERE FRESH AND GREEN












  • Listening to: Tupac-On My Block
  • Reading: Arthur Rimbaud: Complete Works
  • Watching: The news
  • Playing: the mark inside
  • Eating: xanax
  • Drinking: myself to sleep

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 20
  • Current Residence: State of confusion
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: XL, or L, depending on the item
  • Print preference: Large, wall filling prints, or small head filling prints, or eye sized prints to line my eyelids
  • Interests: writing, photography, indulging in maddness, mania, holding down the block, fighting of delerium.
  • Favourite movie: indiana jones and the last crusade
  • Favourite band or musician: Bob Dylan
  • Favourite genre of music: muZac
  • Favourite artist: Vangohe, Paul Klee
  • Favourite poet or writer: Rambou
  • Favourite photographer: Larry Rasioppo
  • Favourite style or digital art: Kung fu
  • Operating System: OsX/XP
  • MP3 player of choice: My mouth
  • Shell of choice: Sea shells by the shore
  • Wallpaper of choice: old and cheap
  • Skin of choice: My own
  • Favourite game: Monkey Island
  • Favourite gaming platform: my head
  • Favourite cartoon character: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle Raphael
  • Personal Quote: Art is like flowers on your coffin
  • Tools of the Trade: madness, fear, and mania

Devious Comments

~Khrishna:iconKhrishna: Apr 27, 2008, 7:55:49 PM
this is extremely belated but i just wanted to let you know i appreciate the faves you gave. :)

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"All art is quite useless."
-Oscar Wilde
~ckirkillustr8:iconckirkillustr8: Mar 28, 2008, 12:23:24 AM
Sure will, although my literary criticism is usually "Man, SO many words." and things like that.

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"The man who makes a beast of himself forgets the pain of being a man."
~heresthebasssolo:iconheresthebasssolo: Mar 27, 2008, 7:04:55 PM
thank you a lot for that, i usually love to get my works criticised too :aww:
be suere i'll check them later !


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:shamrock: Under 50 favs # Feature 3 [link]
~Sandandcinder:iconSandandcinder: Mar 27, 2008, 2:03:32 PM
Thank you so much. Wow.
I will surely check out your writing. :)

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"I'd rather have a threesome with you than only have half of his package!"
*CrimsonTigress:iconCrimsonTigress: Mar 27, 2008, 9:05:13 AM
Wow, thank you! I'll definitely check out your stuff! :D

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"What one Christian does is his own responsibility, what one Jew does is thrown back at all Jews." --Anne Frank

FAQ #27: How to get more Pageviews!
~Doomblade2712:iconDoomblade2712: Mar 26, 2008, 6:52:35 PM
True and good for you! :D Gratz on the poems and readings, I love it here too, first drawn here by the HWL forums, rofl~ Didn't submit cheesy stuff til later... *rolls eyes*

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You must live it to know it, life's full of broken pieces and I'm left alone to clean them up...

Truth is so obscure in these times, and falsehood so established, that, unless we love the truth, we cannot know it. (Blaise Pascal)
*pruts-sketches:iconpruts-sketches: Mar 26, 2008, 3:22:49 PM
I find reading poetry difficult to be honest ... I believe that the author should read it out loud, that's the only way to be absolutely sure that it has arrived like it should have ... meaning where are the intonations, the pauses, whispers ... etc.
I like poetry for it's often strange use of words and sentences, but it's also confusing when you're reading it ... what also can help set the mood, is a picture ... some poets insert an image, it's almost like the words are written because of that image ... to me such combination reads easier somehow. :)

am I making any sense at all?

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I am a child at times - just don't confuse me with one!
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 1:18:03 PM
Who's to say who's a writer an who isn't, i'm just a twenty year old poet, i've lived a thousand lifetimes and walked a million miles inside my head and blah blah blah, but i think this site is good everyone can look arround and decide what they like, i've only had my stuff up since the 26th of last month, but hundreds have people have ready a few dozen poems i've read, this is a great place.

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"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 1:12:16 PM
thank you, i understand though, i appreciate the comments though, i don't think some has to be a native speaker to appreciate poetry though, and not to commaint, most of my favroite poets, athur rimbau for examples, all i can read is a translation but the poetry still comes through, faust is still an amazing epic poem, though i wish i could read an comprhende and imagine them in those languages, t i don't speak any other languages sadly, tried ti learn few, just not something i could do, but on the css it' really easy though thats the one i downloaded and used, the download has zips with different colors ones, in differet name folders, and is worth getting just for the instruction txt file. i downloaded it cuz it looked easy to set up but there's lots more over there, [link]

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"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*pruts-sketches:iconpruts-sketches: Mar 26, 2008, 9:52:40 AM
hm, your writing is a little to dark to my likings ... your use of words on the other hand is very impressive, but then again ... I'm not a native English speaker, so that's really no reference for you ;p
I do have a question for you ... I see you figured out CSS, well ... I still haven't and that's because I don't have the time to jump into it ... mine now is just a small edit from a template.
Would you would you would you be so kind to provide me with your css ... can I call it template? :) you'd help me out so much ... yes, I'm extremely lazy! ;)

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I am a child at times - just don't confuse me with one!
~Doomblade2712:iconDoomblade2712: Mar 26, 2008, 8:30:28 AM
Really, I'm just an ameture to be honest... ^^; You're flattering me! :blushes:

Ne ways, I love criticisms on my work too even though I'm just a recreational writer. ;P

I'll check out your stuff, when my laziness is not in the way... :dead:

Thanks again!
-Joseph Cao

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You must live it to know it, life's full of broken pieces and I'm left alone to clean them up...

Truth is so obscure in these times, and falsehood so established, that, unless we love the truth, we cannot know it. (Blaise Pascal)
*SeelieCourt:iconSeelieCourt: Mar 26, 2008, 8:09:40 AM
Will do! Thank you for being so kind. :)

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Fascinating concept: [link]

I like sushi. :sushi:
Please buy my prints!!!! :buymyprints:
... oh, and hi. (Warning: randomness in me is directly proportional to the overuse of :coffeecup: or lack thereof.)
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:50:32 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:50:30 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:52 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:41 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:40 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:23 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:20 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:17 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:13 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:09 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:49:05 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman
*ThoughtDreams:iconThoughtDreams: Mar 26, 2008, 6:48:53 AM
No problem i thought your body of work was amazing, incredible work, that i very much enjoyed, and was thuroughly mind blowing, thanks for the message i appreciate it, i love to get criticisms of my work, i'm just a writer for the most part though, maybe if you have the time you'll check out someone of my writing, maybe you'll like some, check it out if you like, thanks,

-Ben Stone

--
"And if my thought-dreams could be seen
They'd probably put my head in a guillotine
But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only."
-Robert Alan Zimmerman